My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Friday, July 26, 2019
The Lion King Movie - First Draft
Yesterday me and my class went to The Lion King movie and we and the Girls were wearing headband look like lions and we had Popcorn and Drinks when the Movies Started I was so excited to see all of the Charters and all of the setting .At the Start of the movie Rafiki Cimbs up pried rock and holds Simba up in the Air when Simba is older he goes to a Crack in the Middle of the Pried lands that's where all Lion go to find there roar .But there was a stamped and his dad tried to save him but he died trying because of Simba he is the king of the lions .
Thursday, July 18, 2019
Wonderful Sentences
I have been learning how to copy and paste from our class writing flip charts to share our learning. I know how to insert bullet points and use the highlighting tool.
We know that wonderful sentences need:
We know that wonderful sentences need:
- detail (elaboration)
- capital letters and full stops
- Punctuation (, ! ? “ “)
- Quality vocab - WOW words
Nouns are naming words. eg. chair, book, July, Awhi
Adjectives describe nouns. Eg. wooden chair, writing book, freezing July, lovely Awhi
Verbs are doing words. Eg run, walk, jump, skip, chew
Adverbs describe verbs. Eg. briskly running, slowly walking, jumping high, skipping happily and chewing noisily.
2 .The bluey- blackish bird is very angry.
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